Friday, 15 November 2013

critical response



Writing essays has always been my weakness. The problems faced can be summarized to two points. The first is that I do not have sufficient supporting evidence when developing arguments, which can be attributed to not reading newspapers and articles in my free time. The second obstacle is that even if I do have some materials at hand, I am not good at organizing those points and integrating them into the essay to support an argument. 

Luckily, in this module, we had been given a few articles to evaluate before we embarked on essay writing. In addition, we were introduced the correct way to cite a source and to paraphrase it in a way that it can be used as our own points in the essay. These are just the solutions to the above mentioned problems.

Generally, when one is not good at certain things, one tends to have a negative feeling about it. By taking this module, that feeling about essay writing has gradually faded away. Mindset has also been gradually changed to believe that essay writing is not “mission impossible”. Besides the attitude change, more practice is also needed. As the old saying goes, practice makes perfect. As the skills are built up gradually by putting in consistent effort, some essays can be drafted in my own free time to familiarize myself more with the techniques taught. Hopefully, the standard of my essay can be brought to a higher level in the near future.

1 comment:

  1. A well written first paragraph. There's only one mistake
    ...can be summarized to(WW) two points.

    ... In addition, we were introduced ^ the correct way to cite a source and to paraphrase it /in a way that it can be used as our own points in the essayRED/.

    Good start to this paragraph, until: ^ Mindset has also been gradually changed to believe that essay writing is not “mission impossible”. ...Hopefully, the standard of my essayONLY ONE? can be broughtWW to a higher level in the near future.

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